All Comments on 'The Experiment Pt. 04'

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MigbirdMigbird6 months ago

Psychologically/emotionally charged. The contrasts throughout create volatility and frustrated feelings in this reader — just as intended. So many lines revealing for me, especially: Did you think you must call me that?" he asks, teasing but not. But not — maybe it’s me, but he sees/feels no need for her to do so. Regardless how you play this out (I have my hopes), very creative writing.

AnonymousAnonymous5 months ago

The green monster is a big red flag and the stalking is even bigger.

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Literature- the original way to purge emotional baggage. Some of these stories have a place in my past, and others came from the fictional recesses of my mind. I see life thru shades of romantic tragedy, so if you want perfect/pink fluffy cloud pairings, this isn't it. Read, ...

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