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extreme_hetro_sexextreme_hetro_sexover 7 years agoAuthor
You are right.

I have to edit it by myself because I couldn't find an editor for it. I sent it to a couple of guys but they didn't respond.

dropshot67dropshot67over 7 years ago
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Although the storie is good the many grammar and spelling errors do seriously deminish the eeading pleasure

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