All Comments on 'The Extra Person 01: Watching, Helping'

Tonya and Kate won't get much sleep, the night is far from over for them.

Agreed - it was hard to keep them apart while writing this so I would have some for the sequel

Could have been a little more polished with several spelling mistakes stopping the flow of reading.

Damn so hot I was touching myself. More more more

Well written story, and I gave it 5 stars despite the many spelling and punctuation error. Enjoyed the read.

d.

Good story, good descriptions. I will definitely be reading this one again. 5 stars.

Very good story so far. This can go in so many directions. Can't wait to see the next chapter.

Voluptuos and friendly and edging some…. Sweet.