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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 3 years ago

Felt like I saw this chapter coming a couple of chapters ago. The writing is very good, but the short chapters with brief story in each make it feel like you’re milking it to make it last longer than necessary.

Looking forward to the next chapter, and hope to see more progress towards a relationship / restoration of powers.

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