by randydaughterreborn
I love father and daughter stories. This story is the best I've read in a long time. I loved the generational part. Keep writing.
I very much enjoyed the story. Regardless of setting, theme, or genre of a story, it’s the character development and interaction that, in my opinion, are what makes the story interesting. You have done that marvelously here. This is the first story of yours I’ve read and I’m sorry to see that you are retired. Thank you for your hard work in writing this and sharing it.
Sincerely and Respectfully,
Just another f’ing critic
I love whole-family incest stories - they are the best, imho.
I really liked the generational aspect to this - would love to hear more from this family... :)
Holy Hell, that's how ya keep them down on the farm! Sexiest farm story lately! Five stars! If you wanted to add more, that would be nice.
Is it too much to hope that we get a sequel featuring Hannah 'helping' Sasha have sex with their dad?
I know mother-son incest and especially pregnancies are not your forte (or even your kink), but you do an excellent job here. You do an excellent job of empowering the female figure by not painting her as some naive girl or some mother who spends 10 pages pointless hemming and hawing over her sexual desires.
Incest pregnancy stories are what I love, and I love the generational ones the most. But they're hard to come by, so I really enjoyed this one. If you are ever debating to write more in this genre, please do!
although the lit readers´ obsession with procreation/pregnancy turns me off.
eighty year old husband, lover of women...
I love this one. Well written believable and wholesome considering it’s incest no derogatory terms just honest loving people who have babies together.
Obviously room for more stories as offshoots off this one.
I love inbreeding stories. This one caused a few orgasms.
The idea of mom and son sharing the same father...spurt!
Keep it up!!!