All Comments on 'The Family Mansion Rewrite Pt. 18'

by charlieflemming

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hrobbiehrobbieover 1 year ago

So many run-on, incomplete sentences; I gave up after a few paragraphs.

beanburner69beanburner69over 1 year ago

KEEP THEM COMMING CHARLIE

Fastcar88Fastcar88over 1 year ago

Glad that you're keeping the story going. I love the enthusiasm and the facials.

randysbrandysbover 1 year ago

Please complete the story. In fact you should write/ complete both, the original and the rewrite.

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