All Comments on 'The Family That Plays Together...'

I don't like to give negative reviews. This is fiction, after all, but some fiction affects me one way and other stories affect me differently. This one made me shake my head and move quickly through it. I'm not going to use foul language as some negativists do, and I'm not suggesting you should stop writing. I'm only saying that I didn't like the tone of this one. The baby talk really put me off. Mommy, Daddy. Little boy. It just didn't fit. I found it shallow and puerile. I also won't post this anonymously as most do. You can react if you want to. Rick

Nicely done !

Well written and edited with a super hot and erotic storyline.

The explicit sex between him and his sisters was very visual and descriptive.

Some of the best erotic writing I've read.

I'd like to read more of this sexy family especially with him fucking his mom.

What I'd like to see is that all three of the women become pregnant by the young stud, since dad has had a vasectomy after the birth of Amber.

Thanks for he read.

My favourite topic, - families fucking together, and this one is one of the best.

Very well written story on a very HOT subject. I sure hope there will be a part 2 in the future.

That's the brother and sister speaking, as he sticks his big brotherly cock up his sis's cute little twat. This family has a great philosophy--all the cocks are the communal property of all the females, and all the cunts are the communal property of all the males. Dad fucks his little princesses, son unloads his balls up his mommy's twat, the way it should be in a loving family.

Only if we all could have a life like this it would be oh so good lol. I do wish I had a family like this one. This is a very good story.

very sexy, short and sweet. i usually like them longer, but i thought this was pretty good. i wish the author still wrote for this site.