All Comments on 'The Farm Ch. 04'

You're story isn't very good... i've read tons of bdsm stories...

Though I don't know what's wrong with it...

She's too much of a real whore!!

She broke already? Darn. It's not too late to have her nut up and fight some more. Fight, Viv, fight! At least break a leg off the furniture and pith Missy...

This is not a criticism, because I do love the story and think it's well written, but it's a bit disappointing that she already broke. Was looking forward to seeing her overcome her challenges

Yes, I agree. I stopped this chapter too early, the scene continues in the next chapter. This was my mistake.

Very erotic with a great story line, please keep them coming :)