All Comments on 'The Favor'

Excellent read from start to finish. This is the kind of fantasy I drift into on long drives. I got more involved and aroused with every scene. Could there be more? I hope so.

Great first story. I hope that you have more stories to write.

Quite enjoyable, well written, every man's dream! Just one tiny thing - there's a huge difference between a crevasse and a crevice...you made me smile on that one!

Thanks for writing, you have a very easy to read style of writing.

What a f-tastic sequence!

But watch yourself, reread stories, or better, engage an editor.

Near the end, 'discretely' should be 'discreetly'.

Thanks for the grand story!