by Novengliae
What a f-tastic sequence!
But watch yourself, reread stories, or better, engage an editor.
Near the end, 'discretely' should be 'discreetly'.
Thanks for the grand story!
Quite enjoyable, well written, every man's dream! Just one tiny thing - there's a huge difference between a crevasse and a crevice...you made me smile on that one!
Thanks for writing, you have a very easy to read style of writing.
Great first story. I hope that you have more stories to write.
Excellent read from start to finish. This is the kind of fantasy I drift into on long drives. I got more involved and aroused with every scene. Could there be more? I hope so.