All Comments on 'The Favour Returned to Carey'

Excuse me while I dry off. I had to take several cold showers after reading your story. (They didn't do any good) So hope you don't mind if I took care of things first before commenting on your story.

Well writter and the characters are very real (you did say you write from life? Ummmm)

Love to do to you what you did to me. Only fair.

And yes Brit girls are hot and sexy. Love how they talk dirty as you give them their well deserved climax.

UrGuy

I know you're gonna say "this guy sure has a way with words"...lol. But "wow" was the first word after reading. The most beautiful rendition of girl-on-girl love I've ever read. And the build-up and development of feelings was great. I love your writing.

very very enjoyable, wonderful details. J

What a great read, well thought out, did you have this happen in real life?? great read........

Where is Mandy's daughter during all this? Mandy was married 13 years. Presumably had daughter shortly after wedding (although it could have been before). Has a year or two passed since divorce? Daughter is maybe 13 give or take couple years. Probably not to be left to herself for a weekend. How does Mandy have so much "me" time? Why do we (or Brad) never meet the daughter? Story hole.

Paul in Oklahoma

Where is the daughter? I have to say I enjoyed the first story more, much more emotion. Seemed totally predictable.