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All Comments on 'The Fear in Your Eyes Ch. 01'

by Midnight_Sleeper

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AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
Woah

This was actually pretty good! Just keep it up

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
Get an editor

Both the writing and plot are garbage. You've got a woman who is right to be pissed off, a whiny bitch rapist who is suing the dick if his thieving boss, and an insanely pretentious title. None of this Shit holds together.

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