All Comments on 'The Film Crew'

I didn't read it. All willing cucks should die.

HA

I have not read your story nor am I going to. I will not rate your story. My comment is about authors who tell readers not to read their stories in the hopes of getting high scores and less caustic comments. You must grow thicker skin. It is as simple as that. Readers read and writers write. Write your stories the way you want them and read the comments if you so desire. But don't stop writing. As to why I am not reading your story, that too is simple. Men who like to watch their wives have sex with other men have a chemical imbalance and need help. You may not agree but the science is there to prove it. Also in most cases these stories tend to degrade women. I'm not saying yours does, but I see no need to find out. Remember readers read and writers write I won't tell you what to write and please don't tell me what to read.

ToS2/1Tm

to anyone what they should or should not read. I've only been with Literotica a short while, but I can promise you that I've already developed a skin like a rhinocerous!

From previous comments about such stories, I've come to realise that some people are deeply offended by certain kinds of stories or, perhaps due to some events in their lives, can be hurt by them.

I have no wish to either offend or hurt and that is why I put the 'warning' before this offering. The idea of hoping to gain higher marks did not even occur to me because, as I've already seen, stories of this kind will always be marked down by those who have some kind of issue with them - whether they actually read them or not, I suspect - and I accept that.

As for a chemical imbalance - everybody has one! It may be different in each case: an imbalance that makes someone feel powerful because they're holding a gun, or because they're able to bully someone - or because they have some fetish about custard pies, or whatever.

I write for my own pleasure and, as I know from comments and e-mails I've received, my stories do please a lot of people. I'm content with that.

I think your correct in people are sometimes offended by this type story. However I think one of the issues is the fact that any husband that agrees to what happened in this story has a fetish for seeing his wife fucked by other men and gets some kind of perverse thrill from it. Maybe a story like this belongs in the Fetish category? Also this storyline has been beaten to death in LW:s recently I mean everyday there is another cuck story whether its willing or unwilling. I have read your other entries and you are a good writer I just tend to think you are better than this tired story.Well written but 1* for lack of originality

But author - be sure to put these types of garbage efforts in the right categories such as fetish when they clearly may belong there.

about that definition, then you can take it further to where it could be said that anything other than straightforward sex between a man and a woman is a 'fetish' - and there's already an erotic coupling section.

Remember, we are all 'normal' (except, of course, that there is no such thing as 'normal')

We all have different things that turn us on: some men love large breasts, others don't; some men like tall women, some like shorter ones.

Some women prefer well-muscled men - others prefer those whose main quality is their intellect. Some women like to dominate, others to be dominated.

Who is to say which one is wrong, or which one is a fetishist?

In the end, its all about the genes we've inherited or the behaviour that's been socialised into us. That is what makes human beings so fascinating - their differences.

he smoked the fat cock, buggered by the meaty one, betrayed!

We are not talking about big breasts or muscles.You wrote a story about a willing man be cuckolded by his wife Im sorry but no matter how you justfy this it is a Fetish.Question Would you like to see your wife screwing another man and then put it to her with another mans spunk in her.If you do I feel sorry for you. I know this is just a story and believe me what two consenting adults want to do behind closed doors is their business. But you yourself had to preface your story knowing full well the reaction that it brings.That tells me something Like I said before you are a good writer and your free to express yourself in any way you want.Don't be surprised at low marks when it comes to stories like this. This storyline is old and has been used to often.It ceases to be erotic after awhile except for the few people that choose this particular lifestyle Henceforth Fetish.Keep writing look forward to your next offering

put the mental disturbance called cucks in another category like fetish or gay

stinking crap

As I've said, I'm not the least bit concerned by low marks - I think they're probably skewed by people who wouldn't accept this kind of story under any circumstances, so that doesn't bother me at all.

I've also no objections to comments - either for or against. I'd prefer them to be constructive, but as long as they're honest, that's okay.

As I said, I write for my own amusement and I enjoy the process of putting together whatever story occurs to me.

I don't write for an audience - but I do share it with them. Its up to themselves whether they like or dislike; approve or disapprove.

P.S. Since you don't seem to have realised - I'd be very unlikely to have a 'wife' do anything like that to me!

because anyone who would write this crap has no feeling anyway and is not that bright to start with.

Think I'll take up technicianing. 4*

Pack sand! You are obviously as sick as your sick tales. Parents must really be proud of producing you.

Glad to hear that this is not the type of thing your into. Like I said I like your writing and think you have a talent for it. Liked the romance about the rain and look forward to you finishing The Game I guess this story is really not my cup of tea and by the looks of the commenters not theirs either Keep writing

I like the way you describe and build the characters and the scene. I wanted to read the ending first but didn't.

You are also an expert in getting an emotional response from your readers so kudos for doing that. Swingers and Cucks (both willing and non-willing Cucks and yes 'WBC' and also 'Closet Cucks' and their 'loving wives') will tell you this is a great story about sharing a sexual fantasy turned reality between two consenting adults. Those people that do not understand such a sexual fetish will hate the story due to the humiliation of the husband and because you have made the husband so weak and a wimp and you have made the wife a slut for everyone she comes in contact with. If you placed this story in the Sexual Fetish category you would get far more constructive comments. So next time if you write such a story try putting it in that category and see the difference in comments and scores. No score was given.

...seemingly always in a man-hating way.(Which in and of itself is pretty astute, I myself am male according to the books but I can honestly and proudly say I pretty much hate all men, except my homies. Let's face it guys,(if you truly have balls)-you gotta admit men have fucked things up since day one around here so all this false bravado from a bunch of anonymous wimps that most likely never faced real danger(and being in the modern military doesn't count-whereas growing up in the Bronx does@) -is just insecurity masked as indignation.This guy is my exact age and has taken on a 30 year-old women child. I Don't think the guy is too worried about his masculinity being threatened. Maybe a teaching moment? (@-serving time with equipment and guys covering your six is nothing compared to walking alone down flatbush ave baby.) So far there is nothing in this story that's outrageous so let the author off.

Gale: I enjoyed this story (fiction) and the way you ended the story with the possiblity of more chapters.

Please keep writing about Anna. Several directions you could take the story, as you suggested a smaller house near the city, another idea could be she is hired to work on several more film shoots as a extra. Then parties with the director / actors / film crews.

Please ignore the negative comments and focus on the positive, Keep Writing.

are so fucked up that up is adjective is it the dope or the Arabs or the frogs you guys wallow in so much pig shit you think it is all normal. The descriptive objectives for you are SWILL SLIME FILTH GARBAGE VOMIT INFECTIOUS DISEASED. I guess the guy savage is right ENGLAND is DEAD.

and your mind is truly as fucked up. it's not about the fact that there is more then one person involved. it's the scenery, the atmosphere, the lack of sensitivity, the malice..... all together makes it so bad that I really ask myself what happened that somebody thinks this is erotic or sexy or .... whatever .

there are stories which seem in the first moment a lot cruder but you can feel or see the fun or the intention to try to make it a sexy peace for reading pleasure. this is not one of it.

Here you were experimenting with formulaic and it's a little lame if the writing is joyous. It's also good to get a new writer producing consistently and the variety of your stories is a boon. Literotica is a hard fucking taskmaster. Thanks 4*

Annabelle here is coincidently portrayed in different circumstances in that gem of a tale by Strapper. Hope you've read it.

The set-up was a little different (her repressive childhood, their hogtied sex life), but the outcome was much as expected. The irony is, if they improved their domestic sex life, odds are she wouldn't need to go spreading her legs for all 'n' sundry.

Very nicely done. What a lucky sequence of events to break through a history of non-communication (in Hubby's case, ignorance of his own potential!)

Thanks for the warning. Made it easy to avoid reading a story I would downgrade immediately. I'm sure the cuck lovers are happy to have one more wimpy cuckold writer joining this site. You guys are becoming a dime a dozen anymore. Should make a small percentage of readers very happy. Keep them rolling, and please continue the warning intro. Very helpful. To those that complain about this story even when you where warned of the content, shame on you. (ML)

Subject is now almost commonplace here; You write very well, and I enjoyed the story. Felt that there was insufficient explanation of why Anna suddenly developed from mouse to cougar.

This is FETISH, post it there. Otherwise I get to complain and vote low.

I gave it a zero without reading. we have read similar rubbish numerous times.

Best story i have read here for ages,very English and erotic hope there`s more episodes to follow !

Colin ( a used to be cuckold)

Loved it, and it most certainly is in the right section.

You used to be a cuckold. That's rich. If this is the best story you've ever read on this site, your standards must be in the gutter, no even lower, try the sewer with the rats.

I particularly liked the one that asked whether Europe was fucked up by the arabs or frogs - someone who clearly didn't realise that American 'culture' was mainly responsible for that!

As for the story - yes, quite formulaic but, having said that, this lady certainly knows how to write; although I think I'd prefer her to do it from the female POV because there really aren't enough of them on Lit.

You have a steady mind when writing your characters. Enjoyed reading this and will check other written items here.

I'd give it 5stars, but the system won't let me vote. Please may we have some more?

I'm not a great supporter of whimp husbands (even if I have nothing to say against those who do appreciate it) but I definitly love complicity between man and wife, situations where what happen looks like something forbidden 'cause at least the lover/s do not know that the husband is involved. And there is no disrespect either on the wife side. Loved it but the system is not permitting the rating (no stars offered) or it would have been a 5.

Just out of bed and read this - wonderful way to start my day... :)

Not really a story and the sex was neither sexy or erotic. Not a good effort by any stretch of the imagination.

No Story, No Man, No Comment

obviously pretty bad, written by a cock hungry female who does not cherish marriage.

Wife, husband, voyeur and threesome is a cuck story every time.

I don't understand why this sort of thing appeals to anyone.

Yeah but it's a BAD story.