by Araw
I would have liked more development of his swallowing her piss and smegma. Some analingus would have been interesting, too.
I love dirty and unwashed girl stories so this story becomes one of my favorites
Certainly missing some vaginal smegma and a better description of Belinda's unwashed body: The grime on her body, the smell of her armpits or her feet (I'm not a fan of feet though) the hair on her body, and I didn't like the sauna part either, I would have preferred her body to remain filthy
I liked it but I think a second part is needed where Belinda becomes even dirtier
It reminds me of "Temple of Disgust" but there were a lot of dirty parts missing like the lice and shit I hope a second part will add that
Good work, with several clever plot points and scenes. I enjoyed the “sword and sorcery” theme and ending, but I think there could be more action happening on the way back to the castle. Perhaps a stop at an inn or pub?
That's interesting story.I imagine charming aroma from Belinda's hairy armpits