All Comments on 'The Filthy Princess'

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 years ago

I would have liked more development of his swallowing her piss and smegma. Some analingus would have been interesting, too.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 years ago

... a golden shower might have been helpful too ... : )

AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 years ago

I love dirty and unwashed girl stories so this story becomes one of my favorites

AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 years ago

Certainly missing some vaginal smegma and a better description of Belinda's unwashed body: The grime on her body, the smell of her armpits or her feet (I'm not a fan of feet though) the hair on her body, and I didn't like the sauna part either, I would have preferred her body to remain filthy

AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 years ago

I liked it but I think a second part is needed where Belinda becomes even dirtier

AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 years ago

It reminds me of "Temple of Disgust" but there were a lot of dirty parts missing like the lice and shit I hope a second part will add that

AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 years ago

I thought your story was fantastic I hope you do a second part

AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 years ago

Good work, with several clever plot points and scenes. I enjoyed the “sword and sorcery” theme and ending, but I think there could be more action happening on the way back to the castle. Perhaps a stop at an inn or pub?

AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 years ago

Or maybe a stop at other places like a swamp or a mud puddle

LoverofnaturalwomenLoverofnaturalwomenabout 1 month ago

That's interesting story.I imagine charming aroma from Belinda's hairy armpits

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