All Comments on 'The First Evil Ch. 02'

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EpixrysonEpixrysonabout 11 years ago
5*

Once again brilliant ! I hope you will continue updating this fast .

4nicolas4nicolasabout 11 years ago
Amazing story

Keep up the excellent unique writing

AnonymousAnonymousabout 11 years ago
dumb

I don't get this story or what you're trying to convey to the reader. What is the plot?

AnonymousAnonymousabout 11 years ago
Love it.

Pls keep going.

4nicolas4nicolasabout 11 years ago
I'm actually a good decent person LOL

And that is the reason I hate mobile phones they cause all kind of accidents. No hard feelings love. Still laughing here!

UpHillAllUpHillAllabout 11 years ago
Magestic !

'I was a thought'... that was superb!

As for the confusion below, 4nicolas you are a nice person, anom obviously you are not and WOLF - HOWL hope you don't text while driving next time lol.

EkateEkateabout 11 years ago
Loved it

Dark, poetic sad just like your protagonists painting.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 9 years ago
wow

so good

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