All Comments on 'The First Number I Ever Got'

by SheSaidMyAssIsHot

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FailedscoutFailedscoutabout 2 years ago

This was a fresh, exciting and HOT story. I do hope that there is more.

Thank you for writing and posting here.

Lommel76Lommel76about 2 years ago

Wunderfull and really hot! But - where is the next part???

AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 years ago

Not usually my thing, but a well written and natural progression to a great story.

thesapperdaddy7thesapperdaddy7about 2 years ago

Please write more. This is so incredible.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 2 years ago

Hot and fun story. Would love to read more. An editor would help clean up a few issues.

Thank you to the author.

Myrmidon69Myrmidon698 months ago

This was a great read! The beginning was a little wobbly, but you soon got into the flow of it. Original, sexy and well told.

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