All Comments on 'The First Time for My Father'

by chanelashby

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AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
Wow!!

Awesome, very sexy, sounds like a real dream come true.

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
Almost a Perfect Story!

This is as close to perfect as any father and son story has been. The only thing which would make it completely perfect is to not call the ass a boy pussy. The whole appeal about anal sex for many is that it isn't a pussy, so calling it that ruins a little of the mood for me.

That one issue is thw only change I'd love to see in this story or any future stories with this theme. I am requesting the author write a story with this theme which doesn't call the ass a boy pussy, because it would be worthy of 10 stars as 5 would not be near enough. I can't wait to read more stories from Chanelashby!

I do not know why the father son stories make my pussy so wet, but they do. I have learned that I'm not as unusual as I thought for being a heterosexual female who is turned on by male on male sex. Maybe it is because I know how amazing anal sex feels, and that is most likely the reason I don't like to see the ass called a boy pussy.

chanelashbychanelashbyover 8 years agoAuthor
Agree in regards to boy pussy

I just wanted to let "anonymous" know that yes, I actually agree with you in regards to the phrase "boy pussy". I think it's used a lot in man on man -- or man on boy -- types of stories and maybe it's appealing because it's a little more submissive than talking about the ass. But now that I'm thinking about it, I'd rather hear ass myself. Thanks for reading.

Bambi_DoeBambi_Doeover 8 years ago

How does he have breast that jiggle if he's not only really skinny, but a male?

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
More!

Would love another chapter to this story! Perhaps from Ashton's point of view or both? Would be interesting to see Charles' realize his true dominant sexual Daddy side. The physical contrast between the two is hot as well....big, dark, strong, hairy Daddy Charles would be even hotter with facial hair. Big fan of your writing!!!

50580964555058096455over 8 years ago

Wow this takes me back to when my father fucked me hard for the first time. He was looking at me for a while than one day my mother and brothers went to my aunts house he ask to help him clean the bedroom. As I was leaning over pack dirty laundry when started to rub my ass. I jumped but he pushed me down pulling of my pants and put his hard cock in me fucking and about 15 minutes he came. We did this for three years but today it is with my young uncle.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 7 years ago
Fuck

Is it bad this made me cum........im a girl

AlexDancesAlexDancesover 6 years ago
So loved this story!

I only wish I could've lived this but the story was wonderfully teasing and finally gave the hot result any reader could ask for!

Nice job!

QuameyQuameyover 6 years ago
Excellent job

I really enjoyed the build up.

QuantumanQuantumanover 6 years ago
Well done!

Your descriptive narrative is excellent. I'd like to read more of this genre from you.

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

I'm a girl and my gf and I read this and masturbated each other!

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

sad that this is your only story because its fuckin excellent

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