All Comments on 'The Fitting Room Ch. 01'

I'm assuming that English is not your first language, because this was pretty rough.

There are too many problems to remember specific examples. The idea was pretty good, and the artwork was fine. An editor would make a big difference.

and to the author of the script. TK U MLJ LV NV

Very interested in reading more and great illustrations

Great story - loved the content and the artwork.

The premise is intriguing. Did the women volunteer for this, or are they being blackmailed into it? Does the brunette already know James? I love the idea of the blonde hearing everything and imagining what's going to happen to her! Best of all was the art work. Gorgeous! 5* and Thanks, JB

As mentioned by another commenter, the writing definitely was rough and could use quite a bit of editing. Even though bondage and non-consensual sex is not my thing, I do have to say that the graphics were truly spectacular! If only all the stories in this category had graphics this good! You should team up with a more skilled author like silkstockinglover and do the graphics for her stories. The two of you together could produce some memorable porn!

See the title

Suggest after the blonde woman gets fucked over thoroughly, have both naked women with eves blindfolded be put to work licking each woman's pussy until they go into intense orgasms, then have them submissively French kiss each other after they ate handcuffed to a position when they are hugging each other. Allow the men to leave discreetly as a female black domne steps in to continue their training with a black crop applied to tits and ass to encourage their debauchery until it is time to leave the premises in the dark of the night to the domne's home for further domestication training.

This was hot until they disregarded her wishes to wear a condom. Then it fell into nonconsent and that is not my cup of tea. Next time, put a warning at the beginning so I don't waste my time.

I am pleasantly surprised by the number of readers already reached and the mainly positive votings.

Thanks also to those who have made the work to write a comment.

I also want to comment on some feedback:

1. "Misclassified" (the last comment) : No it is not.

There is only one class for illustrated stories. And at the beginning of the story are several clear warnings. Too bad you did not read that.

2. Yes, my writing could use a bit of editing. Maybe it's really a good idea to find an editor. I'll work on it.

Thanks again for all the feedback.

I am just wondering when the next chapter is coming. It’s an intriguing concept, and the illustrations are very good.

Thank you for your work. It reminded me of sometimes I had at the arcade very exciting

I take it English isn't your first language..

Good story badly told.

A story I read over and over but wating for chapter 2

Yes, the second chapter should have appeared long ago. It will come too, but due to different circumstances it will take some time.

I don't suppose there will ever be an explanation of why these two attractive women went into the fitting rooms to be used.

The guys being Black, for me, would much nicer!

Orpheum69

so exciting to read and see the great art.. i visions so much of that ... i am a reddish blond lol

Interesting visuals. Reminded me of an overnight train ride in Europe with my college boyfriend, a cramped compartment, wild sex.