All Comments on 'The Fool on the Hill'

You can't please everyone! It was clear he was man enough to beat the shit out of guys bigger- and younger than him.So it made him physically sick to be near his cheating wife, imagining her servicing her lover. Of course it would!! The thought would fill him with disgust. Hence the nausea. 5*s.

I Would have gotten Sick Also .. She is a Slut and He knew it .. Would anyone want to Make Love with this Slut ?

So he believed the cheating bitch that that was the first and only time, and he just happens to be there, yea right, he never ever questioned that fact!!!!

Unbeliveble trully its Unbelieveble!

What a sneaky way to get the sister in bed with them!!

Unclear as to why she cheated. The way it's written, she had a few drinks, Harold suggested sex, she said sure. Wasn't unhappy with marriage, wasn't worn down over time or manipulated, just jumped into bed with him. Considering how she got off practically scot-free, stands to reason she'd probably do it again after some time has passed.

Wrong on every level. But should only take 30 or 40 years of therapy to fix.

He says, "... as long as you are my wife, no other man will have you, ever!" How soon they forget. Certainly, that ship sailed some time ago. I always shake my head when I hear this kind of nonsense: "He kept us safe."

pathy plot..pathy purpose and characters who make absolutly no sense

This is some gay shit.

Nice erotic writing but the husband and whore make no sense.

It truly wasnt fitting a story of what I have come to expect from you.

Pathetic cuckold

Not your best work . But keep on trying

lets hope u wrote this when you were drinking acid?

Kendra and her unbelievable behavior ruined a potentionally good story.

" The truth was there was no delight. He used me and finished in a few minutes" Nothing like playing the victim card when you cheated on you husband and he tells you he saw you lovingly kissing the bastard after you fuck session.So, he's ready to kill an man that fucked his wide but doesn't hold his wife accountable for the betrayal and disrespect. The wife acts like fucking someone else was no big deal. He gave her every opportunity to come clean and confess but she took the route if he doesn't know then it doesn't mater. Except he already knew. No shame, no remorse, no regrets and no tears shed until she's exposed as a liar and a cheat.

2*

I commented before I realized this was written 17 years ago. I still don't like it and was surprised due to your later work.

I liked the story. I did wonder if it was really the first time. How to know? Maybe hook her up to a polygraph. And why? Why did she jump the guy that day? Indicates that she was missing something from her "great" husband. And I think the pussy hound's wife should know. I loved the sister's solution. But he also needs permission for one on one time with her.

I like a lot of your stories, but this was not one of them Basically, it was just stupid. Sorry.

Something is off with the kiss after the elevator exit. First time (supposedly), lousy sex (supposedly), didn't want no more (supposedly) and then that kiss. The kiss cannot be denied so the rest is all lies. Given the truth of that statement, how can he take her back? Come, come, even authors can't have it both ways. You used the kiss to sink the hook, to piss the mc off enough to confront the lover and to garner sympathy from the readers. IT IS THE KISS THAT CAUSES THE VOMIT, How can it not be even mentioned? How can it not prevent the RAAC. It has in other stories why not this one?

LWlurker

Yuck and disgusting….

Especially the last paragraphs. Before that the story was just so so…

I ahve absolutly no idea how the authors stories get such high scores…Mista re mediocre and most are disgusting!

Omg what was that!!!

How do you go from a cheating wife, to canning a co-worker, to a RAAC???? She deserved to be divorced. And her sister thrown out. What a slut.

Clearly you must have wanted to write a very bad story, because thats what we got, and you thought you found such a clever way of making him an accepting cuckold.

This didn't work on so many levels. Though I did enjoy the tossing of his cookies when he got near her.

Generally you write decent stories but this, so far as I have seen ranks in the top, or I should say bottom 5, I have read from you.

Occasionally I think you prefer writing smoke screen cuck stories.

Never thought I’d find a terrible HDK story. But I did.

Nice therapy! …very nice therapy! lol

Forget the bitchin’ - I enjoyed it! Great little tale with an ending every man can fantasize about.

As usual a great story by HDK, but it's a mystery how she didn't connect her cheating with his issues, especially when he mentioned a cheater acting normal.

Another apologetic tale of a cheating wife where that "facts" of the story are conveniently ignored but a cheater's lies are accepted as the unadulterated truth. Forced reconciliation and instant forgiveness where the cheater faces no serious consequences for their bad behavior and betrayal.

Hey, I would have taken the deal. Come on a threesome with sisters. It was once. If she cheats again... Kendra to the resuce.

Again Played Like a Fool.

All the actions After Discovery from The wife Is Odd.

I Believe in Simple Policy.

I'm Bad then No One is Good.

Nice story, but missing something. Just not finished.

Kendra cannot 'treat' family. It's a professional no-no.

But anything that involves breasts is good with me.

I'm a fan of your writing, but this is not one of my favorites.

One of the suckiest stories this author has ever written.

The conclusion ruined the story

This is nothing but a RAAC. Kate has done absolutely nothing to warrant a reconciliation. What happens the next time the AC at work goes out and she bebops to the Sheridan for drinks. Probably the same thing that happened the last time. Trust is a very difficult thing to get back and I see no reason for him to have regained a grain of it back.

Just imbecilic.

A good story, with a good ending, but it really pisses me off when writers portray husbands as these weak little fuckers that have to go and puke when they find out their spouse may have been unfaithful.

Real men are not like that and do not do that. Get real.

This would have been a 5 other than that.

Sad to see that HDK has succumbed to the virulent vomiting bug currently ravaging through LW. Puking is almost never a welcome plot device and no one can puke as much as the MC in this story without landing up in hospital. I like HDK and his slightly farcical style but all the puking in this one renders it a dud, HDK's worst.

Funny

Ok, but incomplete

A rare poor story from HDK

2/5

Very disappointed.

HDK, if you value your work, pull it off the site.

Not a bad story but not that good either. I gave it four stars. I have read many Loving Wife stories and I have always wondered why does a husband vomit when he finds his wife is unfaithful? Kick her ass to the curb and divorce the cheater. There is no two ways about it, she cheats get rid of her. There is no room in a man's mind to forget and there is no forgiveness when it comes to infidelity. If a woman cheats once she will be watching for her next opportunity to cheat. It seems the danger of being caught is an aphrodisiac to some people. So just dump the cheating woman and find one worth keeping.

Physical therapy to solve a mental problem.

I do not think that works ... if it was me ... I would be more worried after that behavior.

5 Stars and kick the cheating wife to the curb . I would keep Kendra barefoot and with Children as long as I could

Her explanation and what he saw showed she only told a half truth plus her unusual happy behavior

Oh yeah, one of my favorite stories that you have presented. Geez, try and keep them both! 5*.

Noice! Almost like the twins fantasy

You wrote this "tongue in cheek" right? If not it was just silly. He's going to have her sign a post-nuptial, right? The evil alcohol is always to blame.

"Somehow he convinced me we should get a room and, well.. try some 'afternoon delight' as he called it."

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"Somehow"? What does that mean?

"Hey, let's shag?"

"Sure, sounds gird to me."

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Or he had to spend a few minutes convincing her? Or an hour...?

And if either of the latter choices, why did she hang around so long *letting* him "convince her"?

"Hey, you wanna shag?"

"What?! I'm a married woman! Get away from me."

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Seems the longer it took the worse the implication that she let him.

I just find this story lacking depth, the wife continued to lie, refused to tell the truth when only an idiot would believe that your husband was still in the dark about your affair. The wife Even brings in her sister to seduce said husbands and when she finally confesses her version of the truth, the MC say I believe you completely, despite her having zero credibility. Give me a fucking break😡

The other thing that annoyed me was every-time the wife looked or acted concerned or afraid that the husband might know, this idiot husband felt sorry for the wife, bullshit that has no bases in reality, the exact opposite would be true, anyone in his position would actually take pleasure at the wife embarrassment or pain in similar circumstances ⭐️⭐️

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While a bit funky, I thought four stars would be in order, although I seriously considered three.

JPB

I liked it. I wish there was more meat to it, but overall it was pretty good.

I don't know, a bit far fetched? But I'm not a head doctor, so, .. great story, great flow, great storyline. Thsnk you.

Writer is off his rocker. If the sex with Harold was a one off mistake..then why the passionate kissing outside the elevator? Crap story

If a husband is going to consider forgiving a cheating wife and trying to save the marriage then he should always be entitled to this kind of therapy/counseling!

I did feel like Kate's explanation of events wasn't entirely truthful. He saw her come out of the elevator holding onto his arm, pushing her boobs into him. The kiss appeared mutual and passionate. She was smiling and only had eyes for him.

To hear her say she was upset and just wanted to get out of there. That he kissed her as a way of showing off that he just fucked her ... seems like hubby should have called out the inconsistency and made her realize he wouldn't consider reconciliation unless she was completely honest with him as well as with herself.

Passionate kissing outside the elevator is not the sign of a recently unsatisfying sexual experience. She’s lying. She needs to get to steppin. But this author once again gets the husband and wife singing Kumbaya together and yet another reconciliation scenario is born. Where’s the righteous indignation? 2/5 BRB

Another wimp story,supposedly masculine enough to throw Howard out,but not brave enough to divorce Kate.

Once again, your MC is just a wimp... Are you certain that you are not a woman ? Your treatment of the primary male character suggests that you feel a need to have them be inferior and submissive... 3 Stars for trying though !

4 Stars on this one from GW . I almost gave it 3 stars for him taking a chance of getting some std from her . I kicked my ex to the curb as i am not getting no std from her by way of her boyfriend .

So both sisters are manipulating him and he's OK with that? Nope, nope, nope. He needs to run fast and run far away from that family.