All Comments on 'The Foreigner Ch. 02'

I hope there will be much more of this story. it shows much promise. I gave both 5 stars in spite of my annoyance with such short stories. i liken them to a gourmet food convention where you get one small bit of a dish that smells heavenly, looks inviting and tastes almost sinfully delicious. "thank you for the compliment, Sir. one sample per person. Please move along."

Rasmat, I understand your frustration completely. I guess I could have waited to publish when I had more completed. I stop at what I think are natural breaks or cliff hangers even though chapters are short. I can’t write 20 page chapters. I promise that there will be more to the story although I can’t promise when it will be completed.

Again with the last line! ^__^