All Comments on 'The Fountain Ch. 02'

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JonnyRegJonnyRegabout 3 years ago

Betrayed by grandmother sister and mother. So would it be too much to ask for Henry to at least deck grandma once when he gets free. Or will our main character have absolutely no agency.

KTOutlaw80KTOutlaw80about 3 years ago

I wish you gave a disclaimer about the rape and drugging part of the story.

addsmanaddsmanabout 3 years ago
Keep it coming

Can't wait to see where this goes

linnearlinnearabout 3 years ago
Very Intense

I thought it was something like this but not the The Fountain of Youth. Very good writing and I can't wait for more.

Foxterot7aFoxterot7aalmost 3 years ago

Chapter 1 & 2 merged well. This is a different story than the ones I usually read; however, I find it very entertaining.

jcus0511jcus0511almost 3 years ago

Go granny you hot old curse. Loving the story to date, but you need to watch some of the grammar. Looking forward to reading this yarn all the way through.

LegallySaneLegallySaneover 2 years ago

I quit reading we he woke up tied to the bed. Not into that kinda shit.

blackcockriderblackcockriderover 1 year ago

Great story. Grannies love young cock.

01Timber6701Timber67over 1 year ago

Weird story,, yet why are did they tie him down and rape him ????? 3⭐️ on verge of 2⭐️

blackknight314blackknight31410 months ago

The paranormal parts or the story are a bit confusing, but I think I'm getting it. ???? Interesting story though.

Good job, thanks for sharing your work!

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