All Comments on 'The Four Years: Year One Ch. 09'

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peteinchicagopeteinchicagoabout 14 years ago
stories ok

but the main character's kind of a pussy. lets some bitch smack him around for something that's none of her business? Lets some slut blindfold him and handcuff him after knowing her for 3-4 months? Hell you know that's going to end up badly. If she wants him nude she can suck him off like everyone else who wants him nude.

MikefromAZMikefromAZabout 14 years ago
Pete is Wrong

I think the main character is fine. Not all guys have to be "macho." I like how Rosa actually was hiding something like Lisa implied earlier. Can't wait to see where the bet lead to from here.

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Apologies in advance if the sex in my stories isn't that great. I find it hard to write things that I haven't personally experienced. Hopefully any plot and character development makes up for it.

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