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by The_Dork_Knight

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MikefromAZMikefromAZabout 14 years ago
Interesting

Not one of the better parts of your series, BUT it builds for the future. Can't wait to see if Roxanne actually was the writer or if Amy did it.

peteinchicagopeteinchicagoabout 14 years ago
it is interesting

I'm not sure if Roxy seems like the person who wrote the notes. Amy seems to have been trying to seperate Mark and Roxy, maybe it was her, hard to say, I guess we'll have to wait untill the next chapter. Good story so far, keep the updates coming.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 14 years ago
Keep it up!

I too think that Amy is the writer of the interesting notes. Correct or not, Roxi has added another interesting element to the story. I am enjoying the way that you are layering the story. This is one that could be kept up for months. Please do so.

Thank you,

Your loyal reader.

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Apologies in advance if the sex in my stories isn't that great. I find it hard to write things that I haven't personally experienced. Hopefully any plot and character development makes up for it.

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