by lilgool
Great buildup. Like the 12 days of christmas series someone else wrote on here, but faster. I'm confused though if these two were strangers or knew each other. I guess its not important though. Hot sex! :)
Very orginal. Great ideas. Loved your writing style. Keep up the good work! Can't wait for more.
I like the storytelling device, and the playful nature of this one. Good job, and good luck in the contest.
Les/Darkniciad