All Comments on 'The Gala Ch. 05'

Enjoyed this well-written chapter of The Gala, but I wonder why you so meticulously, and accurately described the physiological post-orgasmic "shut-down", and then proceeded to continue with a story line that defies logic as far as frequency of orgasms and volume of semen produced is concerned (Amanda's magic potion notwithstanding.) Nonetheless, I shall be looking for chapter 6.

Great story here. I hope to see more orgasm tortures and kinky devices :-)

I quite like your story; it’s so funny. I don’t think I’ve laughed so much in quite a while. Such utter nonsense.