All Comments on 'The Game'

Reads like a smutty school essay, and revelatory of the writer's own social weaknesses.

Full marks for wishful thinking. Low points for syntax and grammar.

Is it beyond the current tech? It seems to be a little unrealistic to me. The positive part is that I like Dan & Austin. Just wonder whether the neighbor will be involved later.

please

Enjoying it! Glad to see there is a second chapter!

I hope you’re all enjoying this new series. I took a break from writing for a few years to focus on school and life. I appreciate the positive feedback. More to come :D

The statue of Dan just turns me on, it feels so erotic to imagine a beautiful statue of a bear hunk like him! hope to see the part 3 of it soon!