All Comments on 'The Games We Play'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

Erotically hot

AlwaystabooAlwaystabooover 1 year ago
"When I have STARTED to think...fantasy, I always shut it down"

Probably the most honest thing I've ever read about natural desires. An amazing transformation of naughty school girl to daughter was so well orchestrated. Becky using daddy/daughter fantasy like an arrow in the quiver shows her understanding of not letting the best turn routine.

So realistic descriptions of characters, Lance being 10-15 pounds over high school weight. Becky staying in shape knowing it's her contribution to a happy sex life and marriage. Paige and Paul are perfect Yin and Yang and so real. Paul confessing desires for Becky was brilliant seque. Their reactions to parents new sexual activities is spot on.

The serendipity of a simple "I got in trouble at school today daddy" is one for the ages.

A sincere thank you

wyom123wyom123over 1 year ago

always love your stories so good can't wait for the next one thanks

VikingboyVikingboyover 1 year ago

I like it very much. The dialogue is well moderated. The characters seem real. The sex is hot! Please keep the three-way dynamic going.

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

Thank you so much for your writing .

Very erotic sensual

Michael

creativeandfuncreativeandfunover 1 year ago

I LOVED this story a LOT. I can't wait to see what the next chapter contains.

NeukmanNeukmanover 1 year ago

Wow, a prime example of superb erotica. Suffice to say, this story kept me excited throughout the reading. Great job Linda, and I can hardly wait for further chapters

NudeInMaineNudeInMaineover 1 year ago

So very hot. Incest, being taboo, is so very hot.

NLDomNLDomover 1 year ago

WOW! HOT! Very much looking forward to Chapter 2!

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

Great job. Can’t wait for the next installment. Maybe brother makes it up for a surprise visit and joins the fun.

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

Thank you, what a great story, please more. I havent read your other stories yet, but I will do now.

lauraxxxlauralauraxxxlauraover 1 year ago

very hot well done sexy as fuck

LordDeanLordDeanover 1 year ago

I don't think an incest story could be more erotic and arousing than yours. Thank you for sharing it.

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

Spectacular, erotic, abd taboo weaved perfectly into another very hot tale.

Well done!

ClitNinjaClitNinjaover 1 year ago

Christmas 2022 - now past and over... in a few hrs, 2022 will be over also...

And the comments I will share here are my "gift" to Linda for sharing her writing gift with us, the horny, incest community. I have more "comments" to share - but too many for here... write to me and I will reply as time allows, if you want to to be invited into my secret sex rooms ...a mature man who loves "S E X".

Here are a few comments...

Normally, a male incest story turns me off. The reason is often the adult male (father, grandfather, brother, uncle...) use their strength and male-ness to overpower, force ...maybe non-consensual ...maybe even borderline rape... the female into a sexual encounter. I hate a man who does this to a woman (...note: all male - female encounters, not just incest).

Linda's tale is different. It is built on genuine love, family love. Through part 1, Lance, Becky and Paige had the opportunity to decline, refuse or actively explore, investigate and participate in incest involving father, mother, daughter... I believe Paul will be given the same freedoms. This story aroused me and made me horny. And yes, I have "cum" more than once reading the Games We Play.

I was aroused the most by the Becky-Paige and Lance-Becky encounters... well all the encounters made me hard. Side note: and even now as I write this on 2022 New Year's eve, I am horny!!! ...because I know someone else will read my secret wanton thoughts ...and maybe my comments will make them hard!!!

Thank you Linda. Personally, I now have a new perspective on incest with an adult male. Your tale turned me on. And I had more than one orgasm. As a dad with 2 daughters and a brother with a younger sister, I have now entertained and gladly accepted my fantasy to share intimate passion with them ...hmmm... ♡♡♡

lauraxxxlaura wrote: "very hot well done sexy as fuck" and a huge "FUCK YES!" - I agree Laura!

mom7764mom7764over 1 year ago

Wonderful story,,,,ended too soon though.....

ColonelRebColonelRebover 1 year ago

Excellent Story Linda. One of the most exciting and arousing stories I've ever read. I look forward to reading the next chapter

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

You never disappoint Linda, and this new entry into your work is exceptional. Here I am Anonymous but on email as J---.

Dkynot23MBDkynot23MBover 1 year ago

Wow! Erotic and then some. Incredibly well written. Progressive store that continued to build. If I could rate a 10/5 - I would!

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

Worth waiting for, thank you NF in UK

NNJ_MikeNNJ_Mikeover 1 year ago

Love your work Linda. Your voice and characters are very entertaining. The scenes are hot. Keep writing.

mwdean92mwdean92over 1 year ago

Perfect story, I loved it !

Kay_SeekerKay_Seekerover 1 year ago

Perfect in all the right ways. Big fan of this author ever since Linda's Discovery. Excellent stuff. Some of the best I've read on Literotica.

Gambit33Gambit33over 1 year ago

Amazing story! Linda, your writing keeps getting better and better!

ExperienceCountsExperienceCountsabout 1 year ago

This has to be one the hottest stories I have ever read. Great job. Going straight to the next chapter. I anticipate great things. :-)

AnonymousAnonymousabout 1 year ago

Great tale! Though I can’t even imagine having sex with my daughter, I can picture this happening with my secretary and her daughter. Which would be strictly a fantasy on my part.

Bill S.

HungryPapaBearHungryPapaBear11 months ago

This was a great premise of how an incestuous relationship could easily start. I found it really believable. I wish I was Lance. To have my beautiful wife & equally beautiful daughter sharing my cock, would be a dream cum true. Looking forward to chapter 2. Would love to see Pal get seduced & fuck hos mom. Maybe even Paige's boyfriend

🥒💦 💦 💦 💦 💦

Sex4lf57Sex4lf578 months ago

So fucking hot! Five stars and a favorite point!

ToughSailorToughSailor7 months ago

Oh yeah ! One hot story & well written . . . .

Barest1Barest17 months ago

Masterful storytelling as always. I almost came when Paige slid into his cock. Such anticipation and excitement!

KlitomaticKlitomatic6 months ago

I don't give fives, well maybe a few.

Client8Client86 months ago

This great story has inspired me to write another incestual tale for Thanksgiving. Thank you Lindat817

202GE202GE5 months ago

No tag regarding drug use. It helps us readers when you authors let us know ahead of time. 2/5

ToughSailorToughSailor2 months ago

Pretty good so far, but I felt the shift to overt sex in the hot tub scene was too abrupt. Let's see where this takes us . . . .

Calilove1121Calilove1121about 1 month ago

This story is so beautiful. I actually have a tear in my eye. You have put into this story exactly what I imagine an incestuous relationship should look like. The respect between everyone and how Lance was more concerned about his wife knowing before anything happened. Thank you! This is beautiful. I can't wait to read the next part.

Spartan3549Spartan3549about 1 month ago

Linda great work again! 5 stars!!

AkpervertAkpervert27 days ago

Outstanding! And hotter than blazes. A man's ultimate dream cum true, and a daughter's indoctrination to real love. I look forward to Chapter next.

Only one minor his/her error.

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