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Click here"Hello?" she asked, guardedly.
"Um, uh, hi, uh Kelly? Uh, this is Gordon," Gordon stammered into the telephone. "Uh, Gordon King."
"Yes, sir?" Kelly asked, still on guard.
"I uh, listen, you uh, you doing anything this Saturday?" Gordon asked. "See, uh, this Saturday, I was thinking I'd take the boat out; supposed to be a beautiful day and..."
Kelly was about to politely but firmly refuse Gordon's invitation. Her lips were pursed, ready to begin speaking. Then she froze.
Kelly Straughter honestly could not think of any reason to refuse Gordon King's invitation. She was not scheduled to work this Saturday. And, she could not remember the last time she'd been out of the house, other than to work, or to go to the grocery store.
"What time?" Kelly asked, smiling as Gordon stammered and stumbled on.
Every time she had seen Gordon King, the man was so in control, so in charge. And yet here he was, stammering and stuttering, displaying all the charm and poise of an adolescent boy.
"Pick you up about ten?" Gordon suggested.
"I'll be ready," Kelly said.
"Um, well then, um, okay," Gordon said and ended the call.
"What was that all about?" Kerry demanded.
"I have a date with Mr. King," Kelly said and actually drummed her feet in excitement.
"And I want to be the maid of honor," Kerry said.
While Kelly was drumming her feet in excitement, Gordon sat in his comfortable living room. He didn't exactly drum his feet in excitement, but he did stare at the cell phone in his hand in amazement.
"I have a date. With a beautiful young lady," he said aloud.
"I'll have a picnic basket ready, Mr. King," Mrs. Green said in her flat delivery. "If there's nothing else, I'll be going now."
"I uh, I thought you were already gone," Gordon stammered, embarrassed at being caught talking to himself.
"What? And miss all this excitement?" the housekeeper asked, smiling sardonically.
"Ha ha," Gordon said.
"Good night, Mr. King," Mrs. Greene called out.
The End of Part One. Part Two is already completed and awaiting posting.
**Author's Notes: I offer a most sincere thanks to BeBop3; without his help, this story would not be posted. Thank you, dear friend.
I write these stories for my pleasure; I post them here for your enjoyment. I thank you sincerely for reading my stories.
I especially thank those that take the time to leave comments, good and bad and those that take the time to rate my stories. I also thank those that take the time to 'favorite' my stories.
I do not read emails.
Linda New, Bob New, and Tracy Baxter are all characters first introduced in 'Kevin's Torment' in the Nonconsent category.
Dottie, Bertha, and Dr. Lemoine are all characters from 'Dentist's Chair' in the Mind Control category.
Madison Arcenaux is a character from 'Nicole's Swing' in the Romance category.
Cris Dumas and Sweet William, Gordon's bosses at Pilot Petroleum are first introduced in the 'Ice Heart' series in Loving Wives.
Donald Pellichet, the lawyer and business partner of Gordon King is featured in many of my stories; including in 'Acquisition' in Loving Wives, 'Righting A Wrong' in Romance, and 'Helping A Butterfly' in the Trangenders & Crossdressers category. His warmth and humanity make him not only a skilled attorney but a wonderful friend.
Garland Hebert, the pistol packing night watchman is a character from 'Righting A Wrong' in the Romance category.
David Mouton, Emily's boyfriend is first introduced in the 'Yearbook 2005' series in Novels & Novellas category.
Radcliffe Restaurant is featured in several of my stories. This is the first tale that introduces the namesake of the restaurant.
Matt LeMoine, the waiter is first introduced in 'The Broussard Sisters' series in Group Sex. His character is expanded in the 'Explanation Of Love' series in Lesbian Sex.
Have a swell day. And some of you? Have a swollen day. JimBop3
- COMMENTS
dirtyoldbiman11 months agoSo many character, my head is exploding. BUT, I will read part 2 to find out what happens. Great characters, writing. Find myself thinking about our countries moral decay highlighted by some of your characters, some have useless, fucked up lives, and some struggling to rise above the squaller
BuzzCzar12 months agoSomehow I missed this when it first was published. Great story, as expected. 5*
Hiram325over 1 year agoAnonymous trolls... Eye Yi Yi. Just scroll past JB44's stories if they bother you. Plenty of readers enjoy what he writes.
Anonymousalmost 2 years agoSTORY ABOUT AMERICAN TRASH TEENS WITH TRAILER PARK TRASH FAMILIES AT THEIR BEST!! SEX, DRUGS, DRINK AND ABUSE AT ITS FINEST
Anonymousover 2 years agoWhen did Todd find out about his sister, did I miss the part where both Gordon and Todd were told about her?
Anonymousalmost 4 years agoWhat I have come to expect from JimBob44.
As the previous commenter said:
"entertaining, as always. You have a unique style, that just works."
It's a style that grabs my attention, and
makes me want to keep reading to see what happens next.
If you're reading the comments before the story,
check out the "Author's Notes" at the end,
for previous stories that have characters featured in this story.
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illwindover 4 years agoHave to agree with the last comment. There are so many disparate storylines and characters that it's hard to get invested in any of them. I mean, the fact that it took five pages for(what I assume are) the romantic leads to even just make plans for a date is kind of crazy. Hell, I was starting to forget who Gordon was by the time he made it to the dentist office and there was finally some interaction between the two of them.
Interconnecting your stories is cool in one way, but in another it only serves to add to an already jumbled narrative. There are so many named characters that don't have any bearing on this particular story. If someone has read all your other stuff, then great. But if they haven't, they are left trying to sort out who is important to the plot and who is just getting mentioned because they've appeared elsewhere in your writings.
Admittedly, I prefer straight up romance to the 'small town drama' or 'true-to-life' stuff. Even so, this really could have been more focused on a relationship. Or multiple relationships. I will be reading the second part though, so I can't say I didn't get at least a little invested in the story.
UltimateHomeBodyover 4 years agoTried, but too many parallel stories. Not sure where or if they all converge, but perhaps break them into 3 or 4 separate stories. I only have two balls, never learnt to juggle more.
MordechaiJonesover 4 years agoFar as I'm concerned, the more coon-ass the better. Thanks for the entertainment.
bruce22over 4 years agoReading the story felt like I was chasing a small kangaroo around a very large field.
It was a delightful endeavour.
