All Comments on 'The Garden and You'

I love the Dungeon Master narrative style of writing, don't see that much at all. Beatiful writing really captures the essence of this story and I really felt I was being dragged down with her. The looping of the plot at the end was a nice touch too.

Second person is usually an instant turn-off for me, so it was an interesting challenge to write this.

The roots should break through the concrete floor, suprising her. Maybe she gets arounsed by the plant bursting through the floor, to root her pussy.