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She gradually stopped moving and lay there looking exhausted. She released her heels from my bottom and straightened out her legs either side of me. We were both panting with exertion, and our limbs were shaking from the effect of whatever chemicals we had released into our bloodstream, with our passion.
I think I was the first to slowly come to my senses.
"Sue," I said, I finished inside you, all my stuff...I didn't know there would so much more."
"Whew.. just whew...I know you did, I felt it."
"You felt it?"
"Yes, I felt it... like a warm sort of something, suddenly inside me, it felt like ...jets of warm water, but I definitely felt it."
"Did..it...I mean.. was it ok?"
"Oh yes, oh yes..Jesus... that was just unbelievable, I had no idea it would be like that. The other things we did, were amazing, but this was just way beyond, what about you?"
"Yea, the same, it's not something I'll forget, but we can never say anything."
"No, I know, but I won't ever forget it either."
"Sue, I am still inside you."
"I know, emm... can I see?"
"If you want to," I said, surprised at her request.
I moved the top part of my body back until she could partially sit up. She looked down at where we were joined.
"Oh Ben that's sexy, seeing him sticking into me, I wish I could have seen him going in and out while I felt it, don't you think that would be very erotic?"
"I'm sure it would," I said, maybe...
"Yea maybe," she said wistfully, "but we need to clean up, look, he's going soft and all your stuff 's coming out of me onto your bed."
"Oh hell, it is, we should have had something there."
She put her arms round me as we sat there, "Would you ...like to do this again sometime?" she asked.
"I would, yes," I replied, "but we have to be very careful, it's too risky without using something, unless you know how to get on that pill that's available, without anyone knowing."
"I'll think about it," she mused, "but let's sort all this out, they will be back soon."
- COMMENTS
Anonymous8 months agoSo beautifully penned erotica. Remind me of my days with my first cousin almost 35 years back. It was so much sensual fun.
Devilboby12 months agoI loved that chapter it just brought back times with a much loved girl, sadly lost.
oldpantythiefabout 1 year agoStill one of the best brother/sister incest stories on Literotica. Nothing like youth and learning about sex. The fact that it is brother and sister just makes it that much more erotic. Love it when Sue wouldn't let him pull out the last time. I had a girl like that, we never used rubbers and luckily she never got pregnant. Guess she knew how her body worked better than I did.
Rooster60over 2 years agoOh those days of discovery.
Great writing just the right sped for anticipation and satisfaction.
I also agree with anonymous, keep the story yours all the way and don't let people influence your writing ability
Anonymousover 2 years agoI remember those days of trying to buy Durex without anyone recognising you. Most of us ended up buying them from the machines in pub toilets - 3 condoms for £1.
Great story and very evocative of how it was to be a teenager in the UK in the late 1970’s. No incest for me, but could have been me and my first “real” girlfriend that’s for sure
Anonymousover 4 years agoWrite your story, not what other people are telling you to write. It's your ideas we're coming back for. If you want a pregnancy, get a character pregnant. If you want a character to turn into a rainbow and disappear into a pot of gold, do it -- it would be weird as fuck -- but it's your story.
The moment that other people start telling you what to write and how to write is the moment that THEY should write their own stories.
5 Stars.
DomJ69over 4 years agoExcellently done. This is a story about sexual awakening and intimacy, so please don't turn it into a love story with a pregnancy.
The exploring is what has made this story enjoyable and that is what I think you should continue. Think of some exciting and slightly risque scenarios. The parents returning home early just as they are on the brink would be an exciting idea.
If you want to go over the top, then have the mother discover her daughter's panties and suspect something is going on. When she finally discovers the truth, have her confront her daughter and tell her it's okay as long as she is taking precautions.
From that point, you can take it anywhere you want, but do remember it's the adventure that has made your story a good read. Personally, I would have the mother as a frustrated housewife whose husband prefers golf. She's discovered the incestual relationship and eventually gives in to wanting her son.
That might need a change of perspective,but it would be exciting. If you want to discuss any ideas, feel free to contact me.
Best wishes with the next chapter and have fun writing it.
Anonymousover 4 years agoPlease don't make her pregnant, I think it ruins it and the realism. Just make them keep enjoying it in different environment and maybe try some kinks or add a friend
Anonymousover 4 years agoReally enjoying this series. Has me imagining my own shed and sister :)
Anonymousover 4 years agoI really love Sue and Ben characters here! Shy little sisters are the best!
