All Comments on 'The Garden Shed Ch. 12'

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DevilbobyDevilbobyover 2 years ago

I love your stories of the garden shed and beyond it was a lovely time in the 70's we were just starting our married life ttogether. Not very PC but not as regulated as we are now, of course you will both be a lot older now, I trust" Sue" is well and wonder if you show her these stories when you meet up, I hope she has fond memories of your youthful shenanigans . But you really should have persuaded dad to trade up to a cortina much more room in the back.loving your stories, 5 stars always.

SexyShelSexyShelover 2 years ago

I was convinced they would be caught having sex at Grannies house. Wonderful series !

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

Good premise.

Least erotic of any of the chapters. Sex? Yes. Sexy? Not really. All too automatic.

Three stars.

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

Bitte weiter so !!!

Vielen Dank !

oldpantythiefoldpantythiefover 2 years ago

Another winner for sibling love. There are a lot of car ride stories out there on Literotica, but this one was a bit more with the guest room shenanigans and the ride back home. Taking chances and the risk of discovery always seemed to add that bit of excitement to young sex, I know it did for me. Thanks for another great story of Sue and Ben.

Monagamous_NowMonagamous_Nowover 2 years ago

Love this. Have enjoyed each chapter.

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

Another marvellous story in the Garden Shed line. Keep up the great work, can't wait for the next episode, really well done.

An Anon Aussie

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

Another great episode, thanks.

The old 2 door Anglia seems to have grown some rear doors:

""Well, it's not my fault, I can't move, I'm up against the door," "

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

I really liked it, youth, exploration, love and excitement between siblings, no one was forced or tricked,

I do hope jasperspen will give us a tad more of these two.

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

I have been following Sue and Ben`s stories for some time now. They are great, well done. I can not wait to read the next chapter. Exciting stories.

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

Wonderfully written. Some others on here should take note

Rooster60Rooster60over 2 years ago

Still so very entertaining, thanks.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 years ago

10 stars!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 years ago

Excellent. Waiting for the next couple of instalments, been a while now.

DexdareDexdareabout 2 years ago

My second time reading this series, can relate to the times. Really loving the interactions. Very hot, more please

AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 years ago

Amazing series, simply amazing

AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 years ago

Great Stories, absolutely erotic and from a high qualityof writing ! Would love to read more of Ben and Sue (and Sally of course). 5 stars!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 years ago

I’ve waited to make a comment until I finished all twelve chapters, and now find myself wishing there were twelve more awaiting me. Fantastic pacing, great character development. I really feel like I know Sue and Ben and have become a big fan of theirs. Every risky situation they got themselves into I was squirming in concern for they’re being discovered. I’m rooting for them to find a way to stay together and make a life with each other. SIXTY STARS (five for each chapter)!

TallManReinventedTallManReinventedabout 2 years ago

Well done, lovely series of chapters Jasperson. I was doubtful about introducing another participant, but it worked. However...UK in the 70's - a SWIMMING POOL at home? Nah!

Anyway, we (the guys) surely wish we had a sister like this one!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 2 years ago

Amazing series - please continue.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 2 years ago

More please

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 2 years ago

I come back every week looking for that yellow N.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 2 years ago

love this series, so hoping there is another chapter.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 2 years ago

Good premise.

Nicely told.

Not rushed, except for the ending.

Five stars.

FYI: You wrote: "I can hardly breath," Sue said..." You meant BREATHE.

pcuserpcuseralmost 2 years ago

Great story and it needs more chapters or at least an ending.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 2 years ago

More humorous than erotic. The banter and traded glances more than the situations themselves. I see that it's been less than a year since the previous episode. Hope the fellow comes back with more because it wasn't a very good way to end it.

As an old backwoods colonial I just want to know - Who the hell is Randy and why are they always feeling him?

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

I love this series, we need more of Ben and Sue risky adventures

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