by jasperspen
I love your stories of the garden shed and beyond it was a lovely time in the 70's we were just starting our married life ttogether. Not very PC but not as regulated as we are now, of course you will both be a lot older now, I trust" Sue" is well and wonder if you show her these stories when you meet up, I hope she has fond memories of your youthful shenanigans . But you really should have persuaded dad to trade up to a cortina much more room in the back.loving your stories, 5 stars always.
I was convinced they would be caught having sex at Grannies house. Wonderful series !
Good premise.
Least erotic of any of the chapters. Sex? Yes. Sexy? Not really. All too automatic.
Three stars.
Another winner for sibling love. There are a lot of car ride stories out there on Literotica, but this one was a bit more with the guest room shenanigans and the ride back home. Taking chances and the risk of discovery always seemed to add that bit of excitement to young sex, I know it did for me. Thanks for another great story of Sue and Ben.
Another marvellous story in the Garden Shed line. Keep up the great work, can't wait for the next episode, really well done.
An Anon Aussie
Another great episode, thanks.
The old 2 door Anglia seems to have grown some rear doors:
""Well, it's not my fault, I can't move, I'm up against the door," "
I really liked it, youth, exploration, love and excitement between siblings, no one was forced or tricked,
I do hope jasperspen will give us a tad more of these two.
I have been following Sue and Ben`s stories for some time now. They are great, well done. I can not wait to read the next chapter. Exciting stories.
My second time reading this series, can relate to the times. Really loving the interactions. Very hot, more please
Great Stories, absolutely erotic and from a high qualityof writing ! Would love to read more of Ben and Sue (and Sally of course). 5 stars!
I’ve waited to make a comment until I finished all twelve chapters, and now find myself wishing there were twelve more awaiting me. Fantastic pacing, great character development. I really feel like I know Sue and Ben and have become a big fan of theirs. Every risky situation they got themselves into I was squirming in concern for they’re being discovered. I’m rooting for them to find a way to stay together and make a life with each other. SIXTY STARS (five for each chapter)!
Well done, lovely series of chapters Jasperson. I was doubtful about introducing another participant, but it worked. However...UK in the 70's - a SWIMMING POOL at home? Nah!
Anyway, we (the guys) surely wish we had a sister like this one!
Good premise.
Nicely told.
Not rushed, except for the ending.
Five stars.
FYI: You wrote: "I can hardly breath," Sue said..." You meant BREATHE.
More humorous than erotic. The banter and traded glances more than the situations themselves. I see that it's been less than a year since the previous episode. Hope the fellow comes back with more because it wasn't a very good way to end it.
As an old backwoods colonial I just want to know - Who the hell is Randy and why are they always feeling him?