All Comments on 'The Geek Prince and the Penal Slave'

Great reveal! Fun story too!

Nipple clamps ouch! And then one slipped off when he pulled on them. I loved the, “But I’m not a great cocksucker.” And his reply, “you will be.” Silly girl, practice makes perfect.

This may be the authors best effort to date. It really flowed well and the development of the Emily character was wonderful. A true five star performance.

Great job of developing Emily into a solid three dimensional character that the reader could easily sympathize with. One sign of a well written story is the side characters that have a bit part but collectively make any story stronger. I just loved the Harpers, the kinky older housewife getting aroused while her husband spanked Emily in front of the crowd. The author did an excellent job weaving in the old fashioned spanking to punish a wayward slave girl into the story. The hand striking a bare bottom is so much more personal and intimate than a whip, paddle or cane while also more humiliating, as it is often associated with being treated like a child. Oh yes, and it can be quite painful.

I love the way you weaved your characters around Emily and Chris. Great story.

The only problem I see is the penal slave stories at the lodge don't have a true ending . Would like to hear what happens after their servitude is finished.

Anonymous, My story outline for Penal Slavery has the main characters doing the very thing, although I may have a different story where that happens.

You need to do a follow-up or three as Poms becomes a true anal slut

It occurs to me that Emily and Chris could consider themselves informally nartied at some point.

Good to see you round off some of the unanswered story lines from the previous instalments - rounding the characters. Interesting to see where you go next with the current characters and introduce yet more convicts.

Good start but would like to see how it works out especially after the penal slave sentence especially as they're saving her virginity until marriage.

Ravey19, you're likely to find out sooner than you think. :)

Wonderful story, warmly written.

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Ravey19, you're likely to find out sooner than you think. :)

You're on my favourites so I wait with bated breath 😅😅😅 Keep up the great writing.

Well written, and hot as can be. Love the prison slave slut theme. Five stars, and hoping there's more to cum.

I loved it! I’ve read all your stories and loved them all.

I hope there’s a second and third chapter at least.

I’m a big fan!

Well done

Nicely done - the combination of penal slave and love story is very effective. Than you.

Is there another chapter?

Just found this author, and this was my first of his work. I WILL read them all. This follows what my own musings for what a penal slave story at a resort should be. I am looking forward to their further adventures. Thanks, loved it.