All Comments on 'The Gift'

by Beneaththesurface

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 3 years ago
Love it

Love the story! Something I have always fantasized about is going to a swingers club. I will be reading more of your stories soon ;)

yukonnightsyukonnightsabout 3 years ago

Your comment on my story brought me over to read yours and I'm glad I did. It's a fun lighthearted tale that is perfectly setup for some continued adventures. You're off to a good start and I hope you and wife find many years of enjoyment in crafting these stories.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 3 years ago
Good start of a series

I could see you taking this further with more tales. Good detail with the outfit choices. Enjoyed the read!

fishnets1fishnets1about 3 years ago
Swinging fun

Loved this story!!! The ending was fantastic, leading me to hope my local club gets to reopen soon. Love being watched by others.

Please continue with your writing, certainly hits the mark

AnonymousAnonymousabout 3 years ago

I loved this one!! Such a sweet spicy love story. And never have I ever wanted to go to Cleveland so bad 😂 I’m off to google if clubs like this exist ....Great Story!!! 🍒

RoskoschildRoskoschildover 2 years ago

Simply awesome. Loved it...especially the secrecy to start and the growing confidence.

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I have just begun writing. It all happened by accident. My wife enjoys reading erotica so for fun I wrote her a couple stories and she liked them. I decided to try a submission and here I am. If you like what you read or have any comments or suggestions please feel free to con...