All Comments on 'The Gift She Gives Ch. 20'

Great to see you back. Love your stories.

I have to say it was worth the wait thank you so much for continuing. And damn the partial cliff hanger, i cant wait for the next chapter.

I'm soooo happy you're back!!! This is good, excellent even! I'm glad that everyone is clearing the air on their feelings. But I have the distinct feeling something is going to go a wry. Can't wait for the next chapter!

I missed the story, Glad you will Finish It. BUT Anya, What a Selfish, Self Centered Bitch. She Thinks the World Revolves around Her. I know that you are the Author, but the way that you are writing her, that is how she cones across to me. I HOPE that Domino Kicks Her ASS, BIG TIME. But I am Glad that Vesper and Mr. Hughes will have a Happy Ending. No Pun Intended.

I did try but too big a gap to remember all the back story - I gave up after the first few paragraphs.

Life happens. For the people that feel the gap was too long, just re-read the damn story. Thank you for coming back unfinished stories suck hard. You were so prolific once and that was so appreciatated but often taken for granted.

I LOVE that the characters are clearing the emotional air.

I concur, I have always hated getting into a story here on Lit where the author disappears FOREVER and you're kind of left without ever knowing more. I swore I would never do that....and then I disappear for 16 months. Ack!

Honestly, when I started back to editing these, I reread the story...I actually reread all three because I want to make sure I don't forget something. I'm trying to set up a few future stories in this one, like I did before...so I have to be careful. I don't want to just end it to end it! But that wedding...it's coming soon!

I knew you had not forsaken us <33

Life happens, glad you're back and continuing the story!

(Lit did not like my attempt at making a heart despite showing it in the preview :( )

Life happens, glad you're back and continuing the story!

Thank you, as one of my favorite authors I'm so glad to find something readable on Lit again.

Re: the story... ugh Anya!

Truth be told I've disliked her since the 2nd story I always chalked it up to not fully understanding her ending but this solidifies my opinion of her. She doesn't deserve Arc and I'm glad she found different mates. Great writing...lol

I cant tell you how much i love your stories, but am truly sick of Anya, just get over it all ready!

God damn, I really hate Anya. I started with Domino's story and have no intention to go back and read Anya's. She's such a belligerent, selfish, grudge-holding little shit. I can't stand her in this story, let alone one where she's the main character. I almost want the wedding to be a bloodbath where Domino kills Anya and Sergei. Maybe Luce can show up and take Anya with him as his concubine or something, never to be seen or heard from again.

Love your writing, love the characters (except Anya), looking forward to any future stories. Thank you so much.

It is interesting that you have so much knowledge in “Kinbaku”. (translates from Japanese to the beauty of tight binding.). I was just wondering if this was from personal experience or research for the story?