All Comments on 'The Girl from the Ouachita Ch. 06'

Good chapter!

5

⭐⭐⭐1/2

Still loving this story. Keep it coming.

Cheers

SAGE

Great story and a spectacular chapter

Great story and I'm looking forward to each new chapter. Maybe you were hurried, or maybe I'm being more critical, but you need to work on the editing a bit more. One example: "Chris could hear them the murmur of them talking, even with Jo describing the deliciousness of the coffee cake." there are more. Please keep writing

Love this story but the year apart seems unnecessarily dramatic. Nice love story up to now but the overly innocent girl being left on her own alone at a college with her boyfriend a few states away seems like a pretty big plot stretch to me.

Superb chapter. I agree I don't want to see them separated for a year and temptations for both.

Still a 5 star story, but the behaviors of the main characters is a bit over the top.

Okay, you kind of brought things back to center this time around. I'll raise the score back to 4/5. But I'm beginning to see a certain narcissistic side of Chris that I don't care for. I also didn't like that you took some of Jo's thunder away by not letting her kick the crap out of Robert her own self. The story has taken on a slightly misogynistic twist. 😳 Not cool at all. 4/5