All Comments on 'The Girl in the Second Bedroom'

It's good. It doesn't hurt that it's very woman-centered, and it definitely doesn't hurt that it's sort of a grudge fuck, and what's hotter than a grudge fuck? A grudge fuck that is about two women discovering each other and finding out what they want together?

As for her husband? Well, as Marjorie says, "Fuck him." It's only secondarily about him. For now, anyway. Question is, will Marjorie and her husband have the 'nads to send Lila out for a walk while they hash out all their anger, all their stuff?

Hope there's a part two.

And what will she now do with that freedom? And what about the other two? That leaves the story ending with all sorts of interesting possibilities.

My sexual orientation is as boringly straight as the proverbial die and I would not normally read a story about bisexual, gay or lesbian behaviours. I accept that others find them erotic, but I don't. I started reading this story because the title gave no clue and it looked interesting. I read it all the way through because I thought it was very well written.

So, much as I would like to see Ms.Renarde venture forth into fascinating territory such as Loving Wives, I note that Lesbian stories are her main territory and she hasn't even ventured back into Erotic Couplings after only one submission. One can but hope. LW needs more competent lady authors.

Lue

So erotic. Please continue with these three.

Way more erotic than I expected - very well done. I might have liked just a little more about each character, just a bit more background, but it moved along nicely and with just detail to be very sexy.

Bizarre. In the best possible way.

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