All Comments on 'The Girl Next Door'

by QuinnB23

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Lars420Lars4205 months ago

That's fkn hot ! 5*

AnonymousAnonymous5 months ago

I loved it; especially Jack being so considerate fucking Emma. I think tonight, Emma as gone to graduate school!

~Andy

MafenMafen5 months ago

The present tense narrative gets very tedious. You have the makings of a good story, but that is holding it back. Otherwise good,

layed_backlayed_back4 months ago

My thoughts are that you have written a wonderful piece of erotica that describes this three some in a brilliant way. Five Star ⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐

More please.

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23, Female, Londoner. Experiencing life, experimenting with pleasure, and finding myself.