by QuinnB23
I loved it; especially Jack being so considerate fucking Emma. I think tonight, Emma as gone to graduate school!
~Andy
The present tense narrative gets very tedious. You have the makings of a good story, but that is holding it back. Otherwise good,
My thoughts are that you have written a wonderful piece of erotica that describes this three some in a brilliant way. Five Star ⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐
More please.