All Comments on 'The Girl Who Wasn't There Ch. 04'

This is really well written, and a enjoy to read...

Thank You.

Gay Kat.

I want Ginny and Frejas ability! Sex would be amazing!!!

There is a big gap and ending yet. I can't wait. Well done Sue.

j.

Yes, this was a short part but the concluding part is longer and shold be finished in a week or so.

Great and refreshingly unique story line. I can't wait for the final chapter.

I have been reading Literotica for years, however, this by far the best yet! Thank.you for sharing it with us.

Albert

Ginny sees life as a buffet and grab whatever she likes. She is nice about it though and very loveable. But I am not so sure about Mouse. She seems to be growing a bit too fast, and at the bottom of it all there is this skill to control others, Exactly what everyone who was ever bullied wants. Ginny is grunded, but Mouse was bullied for a long time without ever coming into her own, will she be able to resist the lure of it ?

Ah, well. I will know soon enough Ch 5 is just a click away ;-)

Wonderful story. Thank you.

VvV

Areola is spelt this way. Not the way of seen the greater majority of you spell it. So can your editors double check their work.

the correct spelling of 'spelled' is, well... 'spelled'. :)

Sad cause i know there is only one more chapter.

I'm so wrapped up in these characters i could read about them for several hours more than i know is left in this story.

Fantastic as always ScattySue.

xo

Actually spelt is also correct and used here in the UK.

Love the story so far Sue, although a bit sad the end is nigh.

lacks a serious antagonist.

The innocence is pouring out of my tablet and this fills my sore heart and soul ...... So enchanting