All Comments on 'The Girl With Pink Hair: Pt. 02'

This story is beautifully written. I'm smitten withe both Jess and Elena, keep up the great work.

You’ve pretty much hit all of my soft spots with this story, but the vocab and wording in the first half of this chapter was just magnificent, the description of Elena cooking and then the subsequent meal between the four women shone in a way that conveys your love for those very things, well done indeed! As for the rest of the story, it’ll be fascinating to see how you resolve the other sub-plots, who or what Jess is spying on, is Elena a simple mundane, will she get her Doctorate and where does the as yet unseen, Professor fit into the overall story. Looking forward to reading it all.

Many than for writing and posting, regards, Ppfzz. 5⭐️

P.S. The cooking/eating scene you’ve written is redolent of the first chapter or so of Gabrielle Hamilton’s “Blood, Bones and Butter”, which is imho probably the best use of cooking and emotions I’ve ever read.