All Comments on 'The Girl with the Dragon Tattoo'

First story? Let it not be your last - keep goin'....

Great first story.

Let's see just how submissive....

good start i hope you treat the story with the respect it deserves and it does not end up being an Asian submissive stereotype.

PS: You could have chosen a less corny name!!!

Mate, this was a really great first story. Love that you didn't go with the normal submissive Asian route, built up to it nicely. I'm looking forward to seeing how it goes. This there's a lot of scope to explore his control and her yielding, but then flip the tables at some point and tame him. Get writing my friend, don't keep us waiting...

First story, great start. Please continue.

I can totally see him changing and molding her into a total slut. Imagine her dressed up in revealing clothing and showing her off in public. The tatts make her hotter.

Very sexy story. It was good to see him patiently getting her comfortable with him, so she would be inclined to move things forward. It was disappointing that the tattoo was never described from his perspective after she lifted her top up and as he approached her from behind.

Looking forward to the next chapter. Reminds me of an encounter with a Japanese women a year ago.

If he were still alive, I wonder what Stig Larsson would think?

An excellent start, one that has me eager to jump into the next chapter.