All Comments on 'The Girl with the Dragon Tattoo Pt. 03'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

a few "sidebars" to consider for possible stories within your story arc. a surprise smack to Alex's head might have later issues, so likely he ought to have been examined at clinic with nurse storytelling. he is going to be suspended unless Akira had a blood test establishing someone drugged her, and, what about the rest of that can of "doctored" beer being processed for evidence of crimes and likely defense for Alex? , unlikely the orange/blue polo shirt guys were doing this a first time, so prosecutors would like them to become witnesses against the supplier if the date rape drug.

KiwigiverKiwigiverabout 1 year ago

I would really like the story to continue......

AnonymousAnonymousabout 1 year ago

Please continue this story soon. Its a very fun read

geek_writergeek_writer4 months ago

Would love to see more, so detailed

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Athletic, late 20s something professional. Here to explore and challenge myself through writing erotica. For commissions, story suggestions, or general feedback, please email me directly at Mountain_Bull@hotmail.com Big White Christmas Part II is out now. I have been busy...