All Comments on 'The Girl with the Man with a Plan Ch. 01'

OMG, this was really good. You got me at the first paragraph. Please, don’t stop writing this story, I need to know what will happen! I really liked the characters, and their interactions. I what a HEA to both of them. Hope next chapter comes soon, I’m hooked.

Your writing style is good! I'm curious about what's next. Polly will change, but I'm sure she will change him a little bit as well.

Great start! I hope Polly will become a bleach blonde bimbo

This is highly erotic, intriguing and overall a very enjoyable read. I’m looking forward to part 2, but please, please don’t follow the advice and make her a ‘bleach blonde bimbo’. This is good, in major part because she is clever and has more about her.