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As her kiss spiraled deeper, darker, hotter while she pulled him closer and snatched everything he offered, how could Donald do anything but give in? He wanted to marry Lindsay, needed her so bad, years of devotion (and frustration) culminating in this moment in a whorehouse like she required oxygen from his lungs to breathe.
"Thank you again, baby, and have a good night," she said once withdrawing her lips from his. "I had so much fun. I'm going to miss you and can't wait to see you again."
Donald's mouth went back on hers and he pulled her from the door to fit tighter between his legs, his hands flush on her ass, his tongue forcing hers to dance again.
"Hey, bub, it's time to go." Colt emerged from his perch and approached the teenagers with purpose. "C'mon, close it up, say your goodbyes. You've been here long enough."
The groan Donald had been trying so hard not to let go of sounded wanton and breathless as he reveled for a few more precious seconds in the sensation he had forever yearned for - to have Lindsay Anastacio in his arms.
Even if it only lasted one beautiful night.
(End of Chapter Twenty-Nine - to be continued)
- COMMENTS
Ambul4 months agoWow! This is a scorcher of a chapter, and of a sex scene. I think the author brilliantly captured the mood, and the thoughts and feelings of both Donald and Lindsay, as past and present came together for Donald’s first time. Donald’s feelings were expressed so realistically that it is hard to imagine it happening any other way. Lindsay words made it clear that she is now an experienced prostitute, but that she had good memories and feelings that went back to her childhood. The author captured her empathy for Donald and her essential sweetness and desire to please him, not just as a customer, but as a person, and as someone she knew from her youth in Citrrontelle. It all came across as so real to me. There was one sentence I had trouble with, and it may be what the author wanted to say, but it was a bit awkward:
“During one of those jaunts, Lindsay caught sight of herself in the mirror and gasped at the way her body seemed perfectly appropriated by the garments not only for presentation but also fucking.”
I think I get the idea in any event. All in all, an amazing chapter in an amazing story. Thank you.
Heybuddy654 months agoAs a nerd who had a huge crush on a girl once (back then I thought it was true love), I loved this chapter. Even now, if I found out she was working, I am sure I would save up the money and go.
