All Comments on 'The Girls of Club Aphrodite Ch. 04'

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 4 years ago
Yay! New chapter!

I find it really great how frequently you're posting this series, they're really nice and erotic...

It's pretty misogynistic how the protagonist comes to his realization at the end, and I wonder if it's from the author's own experiences with prostitution.

Sad, tho, that he considers the booking with Fatima to be a disappointment; she's the character who seems the most intelligent, and I really enjoyed the conversations that were had with her. I bet she'd be a nice partner outside of the context of the club.

Curious to see what comes next! Keep it up!

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I write both professionally and for fun. The stories and essays I post on this site are for fun. I've also taken the first steps to self-publishing under the name Freddie T Camel, although more as an experiment than an ambition. I want to write stories that have emotional res...