All Comments on 'The Glade'

....a gun--Then she shoots him in his privates and then goes home an gives herself an orgasm at the picture

I dont think the last poster quite understood what "Nonconsent-Reluctance" means. This was sexy as hell, and despite what you worry about, it is very nicely done. I gobbled it up greedily and can only hope that you write more for us here. :D

What tenses would you like to use? Past or present? A decent story that completely got butchered by your lack of command in tenses. Make use of an editor buddy.

Interesting story - not my cup of tea - but that's my problem. Having the activity in a Glade does lend something exotic to this story.

Ahh, this is one of my favorite flavors of tea. You did it wonderfully. Sometimes i'm in the mood for harder, or for other odd fetishes, but this is the embodiment of my idea of an exciting intimate ecounter. Leaving it open also allows the reader to put their own framework and fantisies around it.

I thought this was very well written and very sexy. I hope you have more stories for me to find!