by aonetimething
Holy ****. one of the hottest things I have ever read, and I feel like I've read a lot. The extended oral scenes, the incredible imagery during the mating scenes. Incredible. Please write more.
Very erotic, imaginative story that could benefit only with a bit of editing and removal of a few too many adjectives.
This is the first story I have ever reviewed on this site, but hot damned this was phenomenal. Not just the sex, but the way you write it. It’s very erotic and not bland like a ton of the other writing on here. I’m eager to read your future work!