All Comments on 'The Goblin's Gorl Ch. 01'

You have to continue this story. It's fresh and novel. I can't wait to see what happens to Holly next.

Intriguing start. Can't wait to find out where we're going from here. Well crafted. Thanks!

I'm really enjoying this, and can't wait 'til I can get to the other chapters. You really got my attention, and this chapter is very well crafter. Good job!

That was really original and interesting, very well written and detailed. You have crafted a world I want to know more about. What is it about Holly that he picks her above all the other human females, which he said were mostly damaged? I’m glad there’s more chapters or this would be a frustrating tease!