All Comments on 'The Golden Boy Pt. 01'

Seriously, I think you are the most prolific, quality writer here, and you are good at blending plot, character, romance and hot sex

for part two. I like it. So he's kinda like Wolverine?

Your writing is extraordinary!! The build up and level of detail is fantastic.

My only issue is the jump from waking up to sex. It's extremely rushed and not realistic. You built all that tension and then suddenly there is NO tension and they are fucking. No foreplay, no touch, just right at it.

Please don't stop writing but take the time to use the build up to your advantage.....you'll attract more readers. Too much of what we read doesn't have the buildup...

I have enjoyed lots of your stories, but this is immediately the one I want to find out what happens next the most in. Hopefully the next chapter is coming soon! Keep up the good work.

Need part 2 & 3... and more

First I have to say, ive been using this site for like 8years prob, and this is the _first time_ I have felt the need to comment.

Because seriously your writing skills just keeps on getting better and better. Like holy shiiiet its amazing how you improve every time more and more.

No better reason for revenge in the world!!!!! Do it for momma!!!!!

You have an amazing ability to make me care about your characters. I've seen a lot of these pt. 01 stories not get a sequel and it's a shame because the characters are so rich in detail.

I've enjoyed all of your stories about evolves and would like to see them continued

Very well done. Thanks

Oh shit!!! More please!!!

Fantastic read. Great character development!