All Comments on 'The Good Dean Pt. 01'

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Great

Oh wow, loved it loved it loved it. The humiliation, the backstory with the bullying, even the fact that Liz feels at some level that she deserves it. So good. And the foot teasing is delicious too.

Vanquished, as a huge fan of every single one of your stories (the two diaries being my favorite), your words really meant a lot to me. Thanks a ton man.

Good start! I hope the story continues with further humiliation of the Dean. I can't help but wonder if Ally is the daughter of one of her high school tormentors. That would be a nice humiliating twist for Liz.

Sorry but I can't get past the poor grammar and spelling errors. At least use an editor.

when will we see the next capter?

I absolutely love it, One of my all time favorites, please keep writing, we want more of Ally, amazing job!!

I absolutely loved this story.

incredible. I hope we get more from these two. Thanks!

This so needed a sequel! 5*

I love this! It’s so nice how you wove in a bit about Liz’ backstory too, and kept the pacing not too fast. I’m dying for a sequel :)

Great story. Does anyone know if there more like this one somewhere?

Very well written!