All Comments on 'The Good Girl Ch. 04'

by SimonO

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 7 years ago
Great story!

Great story, intense, charged and good closure. Would really Love to read more about Rachel and dr Lane.

tentaclesforalltentaclesforallalmost 3 years ago

Scorchingly sensual... It does feel unresolved though... You've sort of wound us up and left us hanging.

Which is a roundabout way of saying that I loved this tale, but it feels unfinished to me and I would mind another couple of chapters. Hell another dozen or two...

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Life gets in the way too much, so my new method involves me posting only completed stories, even those with multiple parts. That will cut down on people being frustrated. Hopefully. My compensation is essentially how much others enjoy what I write. Contacts are most welcome...

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